Today Since we had to have a commercial about what we did me and my group (Mata & Trinity) Had done a commercial that is actually morley like a movie but the title is called Learn,Create & Share. Hope you enjoy it!
Hey Trinity! My name is Chloe a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your topic of your blog post. But sadly the slides don't work and it comes up saying " You need Permission to access this slide"
So if you could please fix the slide then I would be able to see your awesome work and give you awesome feedback. Did it take you long to do your work? How long was the video you guys did?
Did you guys work well as a team for your work? Was it challenging to make this video? Next time you could improve your introduction a bit more and use some powerful words to describe your video and maybe add how you felt about it?
Hi Trinity,I don't really understand this part "About what me and my group " Then you just wrote Mata and yourselves name even though your supposed to change the name to "Farah" which is me.The movie that we did wasn't really a commercial even Mrs Moala said we had more bloopers than the actual movie.Did you even wanted to do the bloopers? plus next time check your writing instead of not actually writing your own name.
Hi Trinity
ReplyDeleteIt's Mika,
This isn't really a proper comment, I'm just letting you know that I can't see the document. Hope you'll be able to fix it.
Mika
Yaldhurst
oh and i forgot that i have to e at the end on the beginning and i also changed it.
DeleteHey Trinity!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like your topic of your blog post. But sadly the slides don't work and it comes up saying " You need Permission to access this slide"
So if you could please fix the slide then I would be able to see your awesome work and give you awesome feedback. Did it take you long to do your work? How long was the video you guys did?
Did you guys work well as a team for your work? Was it challenging to make this video? Next time you could improve your introduction a bit more and use some powerful words to describe your video and maybe add how you felt about it?
Well done!
- Kind regards Chloe.
Thanks for your feed back.
DeleteHi Trinity,I don't really understand this part "About what me and my group " Then you just wrote Mata and yourselves name even though your supposed to change the name to "Farah" which is me.The movie that we did wasn't really a commercial even Mrs Moala said we had more bloopers than the actual movie.Did you even wanted to do the bloopers? plus next time check your writing instead of not actually writing your own name.
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