Number 28
One day it was getting a bit dark outside but it was 2:46 PM in the Afternoon but one night people are getting a bit worried for now, it is Just Because it getting a bit weird that time but it was starting to get more serious right now. But by that time all of the people were walking around a lot of time but by that time two kid looked up it something that was looking really weird but one thing went really bad, they saw it but it was really big, heavy and tough at the same time. The kids were screaming really loud as but adult came up to the kids and said “ what is it are ok” but it was their mother who just up to them. Then the kid says “ NO There is a big giant robot thing out there”. And now they are starting to get more scary there is a number 28 on the side on the arm. Then the robot starting to destroying the whole places but then everyone started getting inside their house. So everyone is inside their own house. But they are safe. But I really hope they won’t die so many.
To be continued...
Hi Trinity
ReplyDeleteWhat I read was pretty cool,what I liked about your story is that I like the big robot the number 28. And another thing is when you do this kind of writing can you please check your writing before you post.
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Maria Keep up the good work
Hi Trinity,Would you please at least check you're spelling before writing on.Ths was pretty "Interesting" and not really making me into this story I guess.Always write about your topic,genre,plus always use punctuation as well.Did you write this by yourself or someone did everything? Write a question at the end and express the emotions and feelings that the people say don't just say "They are ok" with blank nothingness it looks out of place but still your doing a good job onto this.Plus if you think i'm trying to be mean i'm just saying the truth everyone is so don't overthink.
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