Hi Trinity! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I love your blog post! the words in the drawing are big and easy to read so I don't need to scrunch up my face to read them.
This made me think of the time when we went sailing, the water was cold and a bunch of sail boats were tipping over.
To improve, I think that you should add why you did this post, and have a introduction to your post so we know what you are talking about. Also maybe some questions to ask to your audience like me.
Have you been or seen a dinghy before? Awesome work! Mia
Hi Trinity! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I love your blog post! the words in the drawing are big and easy to read so I don't need to scrunch up my face to read them.
ReplyDeleteThis made me think of the time when we went sailing, the water was cold and a bunch of sail boats were tipping over.
To improve, I think that you should add why you did this post, and have a introduction to your post so we know what you are talking about. Also maybe some questions to ask to your audience like me.
Have you been or seen a dinghy before?
Awesome work!
Mia