Narrative writing Structure

Goldilocks And the three Bears:

Today Room 3 had to Work on a (Narrtive Writing) where we have to our T.O.P.S. Well First of all We have to write a plan about the Narrative were but right now i worte about Goldilocks and the three bears.

Creative Narrtive Writing

Number 28

One day it was getting a bit dark outside but it was 2:46 PM in the Afternoon but one night people are getting a bit worried for now, it is Just Because it getting a bit weird that time but it was starting to get more serious right now. But by that time all of the people were walking around a lot of time but by that time two kid looked up it something that was looking really weird but one thing went really bad, they saw it but it was really big, heavy and tough at the same time. The kids were screaming really loud as but adult came up to the kids and said “ what is it are ok” but it was their mother who just up to them. Then the kid says “ NO There is a big giant robot thing out there”. And now they are starting to get more scary there is a number 28 on the side on the arm. Then the robot starting to destroying the whole places but then everyone started getting inside their house. So everyone is inside their own house. But they are safe. But I really hope they won’t die so many.

To be continued...