The Young Detective: Writing

                                   

The Young Detective

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It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!

He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.

Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.

Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.


Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate…  

He looked at the table and found a key but he didn’t know what to do with it. Adam had the key just in-case he needed it for anything.So he randomly found a door with the Exact same key.

When Adam unlocked the door his father was sitting down on a couch. The place that he was walking into was the library. He looked around but didn’t find anything.

So when Adam was about to leave he found an object which stood out to him the most. His father was leaving the mysterious library and Adam got closer to the object but it was just  a book.

Indeed he was a bit disappointed but tried to stay calm instead. Adam grabbed the book and Quickly ran away he thought it was a good idea to look for the precious key then read the book. But dad was looking so suspicious. 

S.E.E Writing Paragraph

Another way to be a good daughter


Do you know what it is like to be a good daughter or son here is how.This writing is mostly about how you can  be a good son or daughter.Here is an example if you want to be a good son or daughter you should say yes all the time and you should always clean up after yourself.

It is very important to always show kindness towards your parents. Although this can be difficult at times, it is important to show kindness to your parents because it shows that you respect them. For example, when you really want to go somewhere with your friends and your parents tell you that you have to stay home and look after your little siblings, it is important to remember that your parents have your best interests in mind.

Another way to be a good daughter is to talk nicely to your parents. By telling them how much you appreciate them, and answering back in a positive manner you are showing your parents how much they mean to you.  When your parents ask you to do something it is important that you listen and respond in a timely and respectful manner. For example, when mum asks you to put away the laundry, you should immediately respond by saying, “yes mum” as you stand up and put the laundry away without a scowl on your face.

Another way to show that you are a good daughter is by your actions.  By being helpful around the house you are showing your parents that you respect them. For example, when you keep your bed made and your room clean you are showing that you respect your living space. This also comes into play when you complete your chores without being asked. So, when you wake up in the morning or get home from school, immediately vacuum the house, put away the dishes and take out the rubbish.

Anyone can be a good daughter if you follow these steps.you can be a good daughter by cleaning or doing stuff without being asked.Like if you get home for training you should go shower without being asked.

Anyone has the ability to be a good daughter. By showing kindness, listening to your parents, and being helpful you are showing your parents that you love and respect them. What else can you do in your life to be a good daughter?

                        

                       Task Description: There are some ways to be a good son or daughter, Room 1 was learning how to write a S.E.E. paragraph or putting a see paragraph in a normal writing. So this is what Me and my Partner did.

                                                  WALT: structure an explanation.

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Celebrating New Years: 

𝙊𝙣 𝙉𝙚𝙬 𝙔𝙚𝙖𝙧'𝙨 𝘿𝙖𝙮. 𝘼 𝙛𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙝 𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙧𝙩. 𝘼 𝙣𝙚𝙬 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙥𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙞𝙣 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚 𝙬𝙖𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙤 𝙗𝙚 𝙬𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙣. 𝙉𝙚𝙬 𝙦𝙪𝙚𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙗𝙚 𝙖𝙨𝙠𝙚𝙙, 𝙚𝙢𝙗𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙚𝙙, 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙡𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙙. 𝘼𝙣𝙨𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙗𝙚 𝙙𝙞𝙨𝙘𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙡𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙨𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙢𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙮𝙚𝙖𝙧 𝙤𝙛 𝙙𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛-𝙙𝙞𝙨𝙘𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮. 𝙏𝙤𝙙𝙖𝙮 𝙘𝙖𝙧𝙫𝙚 𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙖 𝙦𝙪𝙞𝙚𝙩 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙡𝙪𝙙𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙞𝙣 𝙬𝙝𝙞𝙘𝙝 𝙩𝙤 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙢, 𝙥𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙣 𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙙. 𝙊𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙢𝙨 𝙜𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙗𝙞𝙧𝙩𝙝 𝙩𝙤 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙪𝙨 𝙩𝙤 𝙘𝙚𝙡𝙚𝙗𝙧𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙙𝙖𝙮 𝙬𝙚𝙡𝙡 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙙𝙖𝙮 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙬𝙚 𝙘𝙚𝙡𝙚𝙗𝙧𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙡𝙞𝙠𝙚 𝘽𝙞𝙧𝙩𝙝𝙙𝙖𝙮, 𝙒𝙚𝙙𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜, 𝘾𝙝𝙧𝙞𝙨𝙩𝙢𝙖𝙨 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙖𝙡𝙨𝙤 𝙡𝙖𝙨𝙩 𝙗𝙪𝙩 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙡𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙩 𝙃𝙚𝙡𝙡𝙤𝙬𝙚𝙚𝙣.

𝔽𝕣𝕠𝕞 𝕞𝕪 𝕔𝕦𝕝𝕥𝕦𝕣𝕖 𝕎𝕖 𝕞𝕠𝕤𝕥𝕝𝕪 ℂ𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕓𝕣𝕒𝕥𝕖 ℕ𝕖𝕨 𝕐𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕞 𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕝𝕖 𝕕𝕒𝕪 𝕚𝕟 𝕒 𝕞𝕠𝕟𝕥𝕙. 𝔹𝕦𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕞𝕠𝕤𝕥 𝕚𝕞𝕡𝕠𝕣𝕥𝕒𝕟𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕨𝕖 𝕕𝕠 𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕠𝕨𝕟 𝕗𝕠𝕠𝕕 𝕗𝕠𝕣 ℕ𝕖𝕨 𝕐𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕨𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕨𝕖 𝕒𝕝𝕨𝕒𝕪𝕤 𝕕𝕠 𝕗𝕠𝕣 ℕ𝕖𝕨 𝕪𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤. 𝔽𝕠𝕣 𝕞𝕠𝕤𝕥 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕡𝕖𝕠𝕡𝕝𝕖 𝕚𝕟 𝕞𝕪 𝕗𝕒𝕞𝕚𝕝𝕪 𝕨𝕖 𝕛𝕦𝕤𝕥 𝕘𝕠 𝕠𝕦𝕥𝕤𝕚𝕕𝕖 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕕𝕠 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕛𝕦𝕤𝕥 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕗𝕦𝕟.

𝕄𝕠𝕤𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕀 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕠 𝕔𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕓𝕣𝕒𝕥𝕖 ℕ𝕖𝕨 𝕐𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕥𝕠 𝕕𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕧𝕖𝕣 𝕗𝕠𝕠𝕕 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕞𝕪 𝕗𝕒𝕞𝕚𝕝𝕪'𝕤 𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕤𝕖. 𝕓𝕦𝕥 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖𝕤 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕒𝕕𝕦𝕝𝕥𝕤 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕞 𝕞𝕪 𝕗𝕒𝕞𝕚𝕝𝕪’𝕤 𝕒𝕝𝕨𝕒𝕪𝕤 𝕔𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕒 𝕝𝕠𝕥 𝕨𝕙𝕚𝕔𝕙 𝕚𝕤 the 𝕞𝕠𝕤𝕥 𝕓𝕠𝕣𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕠 𝕕𝕠. 𝔹𝕦𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕓𝕖𝕤𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕤 𝕒𝕓𝕠𝕦𝕥 𝕟𝕖𝕨 𝕪𝕖𝕒𝕣𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕝𝕠𝕥𝕤 𝕠𝕗 𝕗𝕦𝕟/𝕡𝕝𝕒𝕪𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕔𝕠𝕦𝕤𝕚𝕟𝕤 𝕠𝕣 𝕒𝕟𝕪 𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣 𝕜𝕚𝕕𝕤.

There are so many things that everyone/some people like to celebrate new years but some other cultures loves new years like how chinese do their own celebrations for new years. But in my culture we do umu and so many different fun stuff. But for some reason I just like new years.

New years are not even that bad but christmas is the coolest celebration I ever had in my life. But most celebrations are different but similar to some other cultures. But did you know celebrating new years is the fun thing of all but in my own  life forever.     

Well there you have it. Have you ever celebrated New Year in your own family like in your own special life. But for me the reason my i like celebrating New Years or any other Years they celebrate is go for like a sleepover,hanging out or having a visit at one of or family. I have four feelings about Celebrating one is happy,shy,sad and cheerful.

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My Persuasive Map

                                                          Description Task: 
   From the last few weeks Room 1 literacy was writing about Their Persuasive map in class so we have to write like what is our Opinion and what about our Opinion and we have to persuasive what is about and we have to post it on our blog.