Jet Pack Try Out

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have the FIVE elements of plot.  You will be creating a plot line after your story is complete. This may help you add more details into your story before publishing.

Remember what we learnt in Term 1 about:

1. Hooking your Audience
2. Showing not Telling your story
3. Compound and Simple Sentences

Begin Writing Here: One Day it was finally Monday Morning it was so sunny outside so Jess decided to go to the beach with her friend Lisa for a long swim. So she drove their with her friend Lisa, both of them went to the  beach together. So Jess went to see what was going on over there. it was a jet pack try out. But The sign says come and out try some jet pack but it only for older people. So Jess went there and try it out the jet pack while Lisa stayed under the big umbrella and relaxed . After Jess got ready to try the jet pack on, she got on her togs on and also she got her swimming cap on. So it was Jess turn to try on the jet pack.

When she finished putting the Jet pack on she almost pressed the red button, so that the jet pack can make her go high. Before she had to press the button then  ken says ‘’go on the water first before you get started’’. Then Jess went on the

water.

before Jess go on the water.

ken says to Jess ‘I’ll count until I say 3 2 1! And then you go’ then Jess  waited for him... and ken showed up Again then he said ‘’are ready’’, said ken ‘’ YES’’, Jess replied. Then ken said ‘’3.2.1…… GO!!!.

Then Jess press the red button the jet pack went really High and high Jess started screaming loud as she can.so she calm down and press the button again to go down she landed on the water Again and walked on the sand to take off the jet pack it was so scary that time and she went and enjoy the sunshine with her friend so she ask her friend if she can go for a swim together.

                                    THE END...