Hi Trinity! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I really liked your drawing, it was easy to understand and I understood every part of it. I also liked the way that you added in a chart kind-of thing (I have no idea what it is) that shows some of the animals and plants on the left hand, bottom corner.
I like your animals and plants that you chose, they had a great variety from sea animals, to plants, mammals and birds. Why did you choose these animals? This reminds me of this poster that I had that had all these animals on it and showed the sizes standing next to each other so we could see the size difference.
To improve, I think that you should move the cat picture a little bit because it covers the writing above it. I also think that if you made the drawing bigger it would've been easy to read.
Kia Ora! My name is Maddison, I am a year 7 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
Awsome, I have definitely learned something new and I think that it is a cool thing for you to step into the teaches shoes and teach others new things. I really liked what you have done and how you have created this.
I think that there is always room for improvement with blogs and I think there are a few things you can work on. Firstly, I think that it would be a good idea for you to explain a bit more about what you are doing and why. Secondly I think that you should start creating you own images to avoid copyright.
What was your favorite part? Kind regards, Maddie.
Hi Trinity! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! I really liked your drawing, it was easy to understand and I understood every part of it. I also liked the way that you added in a chart kind-of thing (I have no idea what it is) that shows some of the animals and plants on the left hand, bottom corner.
ReplyDeleteI like your animals and plants that you chose, they had a great variety from sea animals, to plants, mammals and birds. Why did you choose these animals? This reminds me of this poster that I had that had all these animals on it and showed the sizes standing next to each other so we could see the size difference.
To improve, I think that you should move the cat picture a little bit because it covers the writing above it. I also think that if you made the drawing bigger it would've been easy to read.
Great work!
Mia
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison, I am a year 7 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
Awsome, I have definitely learned something new and I think that it is a cool thing for you to step into the teaches shoes and teach others new things. I really liked what you have done and how you have created this.
I think that there is always room for improvement with blogs and I think there are a few things you can work on. Firstly, I think that it would be a good idea for you to explain a bit more about what you are doing and why. Secondly I think that you should start creating you own images to avoid copyright.
What was your favorite part?
Kind regards,
Maddie.